Storyboard

Project- 'School run' storyboard by Dan Payne

Audience Feedback on pitch

Feedback 1

I feel that the pitch is very basic, and quite boring as they are just sitting on a chair reading the script of their phone which isn't very professional in my opinion. It doesn't really show the creative side of the creators and I feel that they could of put a lot more effort in the way they present the pitch. However, it does give a detailed explanation of the film so I understand what the basic narrative of the film is now. It seems extremely rushed and could be of a much better quality and this does put me off watching the film as I worry if they are rushing the script that they may rush the trailer. 

Feedback 2

I enjoyed the storyline of the script and I would definitely watch it, but the way that it was put across in the pitch could've been a lot better. I didn't like the fact that they use read the script off their films which makes me wonder whether they have really thought about their script and how they are going to produce a high quality film. It seems as though they just wanted to get it out of the way and start work on other things rather than spend time on creating their pitch which could affect their chances of gaining a bigger audience. 

Feedback 3

The pitch seems very rushed. It seems as though it was planned for a very short amount of time due to them reading it off of their phones. It doesn't show much enthusiasm in the story, which is the opposite of what I expected, and it has put me off watching it as I don't believe that with their enthusiasm they have shown in their pitch to produce a high quality film. I may consider watching it if my friends tell me that the film is very good but I wouldn't count on it.